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Cool game! It feels a bit basic but the story was original and the end was unexpected :D Great job!

[Harry Propane]

Cool :)

The graphics are great, but the song feels a bit off-topic and the controls/character physics are hard to master. I suggest you find a song that fits better the game theme and you review the physics in order to make the avatar easier to move ;) (making it a bit slower and less "heavy"/increasing accelerations would help)

Other than that, it's nice :)

[Space Fireman]

Cool game!

I like the 8-bit space theme, it's really well made :) The graphics were good, the music was ok. The gameplay is fun but got a bit boring after a while; I guess it's because it's not my favorite game style ;) But overall, it was fun to play :)

Nice job :)

EddLioni responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Extraction: Chapter 0]

Really cool! :)

I've played the older version so I won't re-write everything I said, but I like the few improvements and I'm waiting for the next chapters :D

[Driving Force 4]

Nice game! Super well structured, awesome 3D graphics, loads of action... Perfect for that game type! :D

[Dotless]

Really entertaining! A simple system that allows enough twists to keep my attention for a long time in this bugless well-decorated game :) Nice job! :D

[Death By Ninja]

Cool game :)

The graphics are really good and the controls are smooth and easy (even though I just have to spam WASD in order to survive ;D) and I didn't encounter any bug :) However, the game got boring after a while. I understand it's hard to do so in a game like that but I suggest you add something more to make me press the replay button a few more times ;)

Overall, good game :)

[Clockwork Escape]

Cool :) But short :(

It's good for a flash game. It's a bit short and easy (174 seconds... Less than 3 minutes :o) but it overall feels somewhat fun to play. Everything was logic and possible to find. A good thing to make it better would be to focus on the art; after playing several point'n'click "Escape"-style games, I found out that the ones I liked the most were the ones that had the best art ;)

Keep up the good work! :)

[Battery Efficient]

Kinda cool :)

The game felt overall pretty basic : ordinary 8-bit music for menu title (and none while playing [LAST SECOND EDIT: The music just started after 20 minutes for some reason...]), repeated pixel art, unpolished layouts/maps for levels (I struggle at the first jump because the character doesn't jump high enough, and when I pass it, I crash either in the pit or in the following spike [LAST SECOND EDIT #2: just found out the ability to jump on walls... XD You should add a tutorial or something]). I suggest you revise your game a few more times and check these :
- It should start easy enough
- Music could be improved
- Art could be a little more varied and polished
- Some tutorial would help :)
- It can have some more original/unique element

It doesn't feel like a "bad" game or anything, it just doesn't feel "worked" enough. I know you want to make it 1992-themed, but with more efforts it could be a little more fun to play in my opinion ;)

LeviRamirez responds:

Well, I do appreciate your feedback the game was made to be insanely difficult and I literally made it in a week for fun, I was in the mood to make a simplistic game for shits and giggles. Thanks for the review though :)

[Arrow Crash]

Cool :)

The overall impression is good, but there is place for improvements.
The gameplay is good (no bugs found! :D) and somewhat hard, but it doesn't feel entertaining enough. I suggest you add some unique/new/innovative element to the game to make it more fun to play ;)
The art is correct. I didn't find any graphic flaw, and the music is good. However, as @silversteelcrow said, try lowering the volume for the sound effect when you collect a star ;)

Overall, the game is well made but there is some entertaining element that is missing. I saw it's your first game on NG; keep working, I feel you have potential :)