Lesuperchef's Reviews

[Belle the Beluga 3]

At first I was wondering if it was just stock videos... And then I understood. I admit I laugned a bit :) Simple but efficient.

(I'd recommend you crop down a bit on the static part, at some point I thought it was going to be a still image)

[Waking up]

Nice! I really like the fluid animations :) Keep up the good work ^^

[Black Crystal - Episode Prologue: "Lighting the Spark"]

Really well produced!

I didn't expect so much for a pixel art movie, the amount of details is just perfect :)
The voices sound a bit off at some times, but otherwise it sounds really natural

The only problem I see is the story - even though kind of interesting, it isn't anything really new. I suggest you try making the action a bit more original, it would make it perfect :) Now, I understand you can't completely change the story now that it's started, but you have some opportunity to make something more creative (some idea that you would install over episodes, or if you start a whole new series, etc.), it would be even more interesting to watch :)
But other than this, everything seems fine ^^

Keep up the good work! :)

[Yin and Yang]

Really cool and fun game! :)

[GBOY DEMO (DISCONTINUED)]

I gave 2 stars, but it's not because the idea is bad, it's because there's close to nothing to judge here. It would be interesting to see a bit more before giving a relevant review.

The textures are good, I like the idea of making the art style similar to the Game Boy. The animations look natural, both for the player and the enemies. Talking about the player character, it controls quite well. The enemies' hitboxes are a bit too large; I recommend you allow the player to get very close to the enemies, even if the player can touch them a bit, just to make the whole thing more fun to play and avoid the classic the-enemy-was-a-whole-meter-away-but-it-still-touched-me-because-the-hitbox-is-square-and-it-has-corners-but-the-enemy-is-round-and-doesn't-cover-the-whole-hitbox.

Apart from that... There's no menu, no music, no pause, no retry button, no more than a 30-second gameplay, nothing below the ground to kill me if I fall off (you stated that in the description, I suppose you'll fix it if/when you'll make a full version), no level ending and therefore no more than a single level, no game intro showing your name...

I gave 2 stars because I'd recommend this game to the average NG user as much as I'd recommend any game around 2 stars, not because it's bad, but because there's nearly nothing to enjoy fo more than a few seconds, minutes at most.

Come back with a complete game (or a more advanced demo) with the same level of quality, and it would probably be worth 4 stars. Add some original or unique ideas in there, and you can easily reach 5 stars.

Good luck, I hope you'll end up making that full version! I want to see how it would turn out :)

MrOnsku responds:

When i published the demo i thought to myself that yeah, it lacks too much stuff to be a demo.
But thank you for your review though! :) (And i'll work on the hitboxes a bit more x))

[Space Survival]

Pretty nice! I like the music choice and the visual artwork. The spaceships look like spaceships, the bullets are visible and clear, the hitboxes aren't too big... It's been quite fun to play, goob job! :)

Next steps would be to create a scenario, endless games are fun but they can get boring once a certain level of skill has been reached (I see you put various ship patterns and bosses, that's a good idea).

hassaanmunir responds:

Hi Lesuperchef,

Thank you for such an amazing comment. I appreciate it. You're right that endless games get boring after some time. As it is my first game, I wanted to make a small game and an endless game could be a good choice because all that I had to do is make things automated (but still it took me quite a long time 😞). And the best thing is I got reviews and suggestions from amazing people (like you) from different platforms.

I'll try to make more fun and engaging game next time
Thanks

[Enchanted Forest]

Sounds quite cool! I do feel the ambience :) Let me know if you're still active here!

[Windswept Forest - C.M.X.M.]

Sounds quite cool to me :)

[Escape [Instrumental]]

Quite nice, very relaxing :) Was that played IRL or was it made in a music software? Anyway, it sounds really cool! :)

VortexVisionz responds:

Thanks! It’s me jamming on my acoustic in real time. Made it up on the spot/ 2 recording sessions