Great song!
The intro really caught my attention :)
The evolution was perfect until 0:35, where the pad felt too loud and seemed to cover the other instruments. At 0:45 or so (also at 2:09), same thing with the pad that goes on and off like a wub; try making it more quiet so it doesn't ruin all the calm ambiance that you built just before ;)
Other than this, the overall arrangement/structure of the song was really cool. Nice song! :)
I like :) What I liked a bit less from the original is that the drop came a little suddenly, without enough build-up (my opinion); the build-up in this VIP edition makes it my favorite :) I also really liked the ending, its calmness contrasts with the intense drop :D
(Just a question, why is it Drum'n'Bass if the drops (1:16 and 2:33) are dubstep? Just wondering, I'm not very familiar with music categories)
I agree, I tried adding waaaay more tension. :P
And usually the drum pattern+BPM identifies a genre. Dubstep usually being half-step at 140 BPM.
I put dubstep in the tags even though it's not because the drops consist mostly of growls, hard basses etc. It feels like super fast dubstep but alas, it's drum n' bass. (:
I really like the atmosphere of the song! The description/story fits so well to the theme :D
Thanks a lot! I always try and find a theme that fits :)
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Detious - Divinity (VIP) 
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